Thursday, May 15, 2008

Writing for Grammar: Grammar and Glamour


As of 30 November 2005, the Oxford English Dictionary contained aboutGrandma 301,100 main entries. The dictionary's latest, complete print edition (Second Edition, 1989) was printed in 20 volumes, comprising 291,500 entries in 21,730 pages.

The OED could be called one of the first "Wicki" projects, since much of it is compiled by volunteers.

One of the most famous of the OED's volunteer word explorers was J.R.R. Tolkien, the great medieval scholar and author of "Lord of the Rings." In a song that appears in the Ring Trilogy, Tolkien wrote "Of glamoury he tidings heard" (He heard news of magic).

In a study of Tolkien's language, "Ring of Words," the authors reveal the influence of OED learning upon all of Tolkien's scholarly and imaginative writing:"Glamoury (occult knowledge, magic, necromancy) ... is a relatively modern word (the first example in the OED files is from a Scots poem of 1811), adapted from glamour ... which the OED suggests may be due to the influence of a related word, gramarye. The connection between magic and grammar is perhaps not instantly obvious to the modern reader."

For more, go to Grammar and Glamour on the Writing Tips page of Moore Partners.

Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Global Business English: Get Ready for Globish

When native speakers work internationally, their language often changes. David Crystal, the author of English as a Global Language, writes: "On several occasions, I have encountered English-as-a-first-language politicians, diplomats, and civil servants working in Brussels commenting on how they have felt their own English being pulled in the direction of these foreign-language patterns . . . These people are not 'talking down' to their colleagues or consciously adopting simpler expressions, for the English of their interlocutors may be as fluent as their own. It is a natural process of accommodation, which in due course could lead to new standardised forms."

“You are bound to have more variations when you have more people writing and speaking a language,” says Steven Moore, Co-Founder and Dean of Global Business English, a web-based company that offers instructional modules, written coaching, and verbal coaching. “We might even see something like Nadsat, the verbal language Anthony Burgess created in A Clockwork Orange.”

“Nadsat is mostly English with some Cockney rhyming slang, phrases from the King James Bible, some Russian words, and words that Burgess invented.”

“Nadsat is really a vocabulary of extra words used for semi-private communication or to describe the world as they see it,” says Moore, “That makes it not so much a language as an argot. The words are inflected in English patterns regardless of their language of origin. Alex and his droogs are capable of speaking standard English when they want to.”

For more, go to Get Ready for Globish on the Writing Tips page of Moore Partners

Sunday, May 11, 2008

Presentation Skills: Control Your Nervousness


One of the secrets of becoming a dynamic public speaker is to use your nervousness for energy. While some will advise strategies to reduce your nervousness, I think you can use it to your advantage.

An extra spurt of adrenaline (also known as the rush), your heart beating faster, those knots in your stomach, more rapid breathing-that's excitement, not nervousness. Redefine your physical sensations. You would feel all those things during a passionate kiss with your lover or in the middle of that holiday you've always wanted. All great performers, great actors, great athletes, and great public speakers experience nervousness, and it is one of the characteristics that helps make them great.

The times I haven't been nervous were the times I was flat and uninspiring. I'd rather be nervous. The answer lies in learning how to control the nervousness, not eliminate it. These six tips might help.

(1) Make eye contact

Making eye contact with your audience is invaluable because once you are able to look into the eyes of your listeners, you are then taking the first step in being conversational with your audience. Many people are under the mistaken belief that when they stand at the lectern, on the podium or at the boardroom table, they should be someone other than who they are. That is wrong. The person you are in your office, in your home, in a social situation or a business setting, is the person that should be giving that speech or that presentation. Don't try to be someone you're not. You are fine as you are.

Yet, inexperienced presenters, and some experienced ones, often have difficulty actually looking at their audience.

This may partly be due to nerves (If I pretend they're not there, I won't be nervous)or if staring at notes and slides, it may be a sign of inadequate preparation.

Some presenters rarely look at anyone for longer than one second, instead spending most of the time looking at the slide and talking to it. This is especially true when there are many diagrams and charts to explain. Rather than point to the information and look at the audience, the presenter points at the information on the screen and looks at it while talking.

But if we are there to talk, we should talk to someone.

For more tips, go to Control Your Nervousness on the Writing Tips page at Moore Partners.

Saturday, May 10, 2008

Global Business English

Welcome to a new featured category on The Communications Coach - Global Business English. In this category we will have irregular postings on a subsection of English used in business throughout the world that is related to a new instructional website called Global Business English.

This website is a direct outgrowth of my work teaching at the Queen's School of Business and is designed to help fill the need for on-line instruction in global business English. So, check it out by clicking on a link in this posting or in our regular Links section or by clicking on the Global Business English logo. However you get there, and whether English is you first or ninth language, Global Business English can help you be a more effective writer and presenter.

The Future of Global Business is English

English is the world’s primary language for business. Because of economic, demographic, and cultural reasons, English has advantages over other languages such as Spanish, Arabic, Mandarin, Japanese, French, and German.

A primary advantage in is Internet communication, which has made the world smaller and more accessible. Since English is the main Internet language, increased Internet usage means an increasing demand for English.

In the next 10 to 15 years, the number of people learning English is likely to reach a peak at around 2 billion. A significant increase will come from Chinese students, estimated now at around 250 million English learners, increasing of about 20 million per year, according to David Graddol in the British Council Publication called English Next.

It is certain that more people than ever want to learn English. Far from being news, that has become one of the few enduring facts of global modern life – a trend that began in the late 19th century when English was heralded, from Europe to Japan, as the new rising world language.

Here’s an excerpt from an economic development brochure put out by the Hong King government (emphasis mine).

With a population of seven million, Hong Kong is a busy and energetic international metropolis. A friendly and accessible city, Hong Kong thrives on its strong work ethic and can-do attitude.

Hong Kong boasts a well-educated workforce, with almost half of all students attending universities at home or abroad. This local pool of experienced and entrepreneurial talent offers an essential mix of international market savvy with an appreciation of the business culture in the fast-growing Mainland cities, and across Asia.

In offices and boardrooms, English is the usual language of business, while many in Hong Kong speak English, Cantonese and Mandarin, providing another vital link to business with Mainland China markets and consumers.

Hong Kong’s local pool of talent offers an essential mix of international market savvy with an appreciation of the business culture in Mainland China.

• Multi-lingual workforce – English is the language of business

• Highly trained, flexible and motivated population

• Experienced in travelling and working in Mainland China and throughout the region

• Familiar with the latest international business practices

• Strong work ethic – industrial action extremely rare

Welcome to Hong Kong, Asia’s Business Capital. Invest HK.

Once the number of English speakers can be used to lure investors, it is proof that English has “currency” and value. It can be monetized, and it is the fastest way to global business success.

Friday, May 9, 2008

Writing for Grammar: More on Who vs. Whom

There is often confusion about when to use "who" and "whom". If you are unsure, use "who". It is much more common than "whom" and the use of "whom" is considered old fashioned in some circles. However, you will always be right if you remember three rules:

1. Use "who" when it is the subject of a verb.

2. Use "whom" when it is not the subject of a verb.

3. Always use “whom” after prepositions

Remember these three rules and you will never again wonder if it should be “who” or “whom”.

Rule 1. The word "who" can only be used when it is the subject of a verb.

SUBJECT OF A VERB ? What is that?

Verbs are action words like "threw", "drives", "drinks", etc.)
The subject of a verb is the person or thing that is doing the throwing, driving, or drinking.

Peter drives to Ottawa on Tuesdays.
("Peter" is the subject of the verb "drives".)

Helen's boss drinks only soda water.
("Helen's boss" is the subject of the verb "drinks".)

Harrison threw a no-hitter for the Blue Jays.
Harrison” is the subject of the verb “threw”.

Buendia scored the winning goal.
“Buendia” is the subject of the verb “scored”.

For more on who vs whom, go to Who vs. Whom on Writing Tips at Moore Partners.

Thursday, May 1, 2008

Writing for Style: Use Appositives for Detail

Revised from Richard's Grammar & Composition Blog

An appositive, a noun or noun phrase that identifies or renames another noun, is a good way to add detail or dimension to your writing. The term appositive comes from the Latin word for "placing close by," and an appositive usually appears right after the word or phrase that it renames.

You’ve already seen a nonrestrictive example in the first sentence of this writing tip (a noun or noun phrase that identifies or renames another noun) and another restrictive example from the second sentence (appositive).

Here, from George Orwell's essay "A Hanging," are three more examples:

  1. We were waiting outside the condemned cells, a row of sheds fronted with double bars, like small animal cages.
  2. He was a Hindu, a puny wisp of a man, with a shaven head and vague liquid eyes.
  3. Francis, the head jailer, a fat Dravidian in a white drill suit and gold spectacles, waved his black hand.

In each of Orwell's sentences, the appositive could be substituted for the noun it renames (cells, Hindu, Francis). Or it could be deleted without changing the basic meaning of the sentence. Set off by commas, such appositives are said to be nonrestrictive.

In some cases, an appositive might be thought of as a simplified adjective clause (a word group beginning with who or which).

This next sentence, for example, relies on an adjective clause to identify the subject, hangman:

The hangman, who was a gray-haired convict in the white uniform of the prison, was waiting beside the machine.

Now look at George Orwell's original version of the sentence, with the adjective clause reduced to a more concise appositive:

The hangman, a gray-haired convict in the white uniform of the prison, was waiting beside the machine.

Viewed this way, appositives offer a way to cut the clutter in our writing. And that, you'll have to admit, makes it a handy little device, a compact grammatical structure.

For more on changing adjective clauses to appositives, punctuating appositives and a quiz on appositives, go to Appositives for Detail on the Writing Tips page of Moore Partners.